good work cameron good on you.i like your adjictses
good job, great words used and lovely clear voice.very fun story and cool super hero.
great work we think you used some great words to decribe his feelings.by h.g and g.o
well done cameron i love your work you are cool
great work cameron! logan and cory love your work.we like how you said his metal muscular body turned red
good but use a bit more detail : Jack/Kiana
That was awesome cameron. I'll make sure I'm watching out for that Gamma Radiation!Go Baron Von Nocturnal Bat!