I think that children should go on camp because we can do lots of really fun activities which means we can learn new things that we did not know.
Secondly we can get to know other people, which will be good because activities might be more interesting.
Another reason is there are new places to go which means we can explore.
Also we can go glow worming which will be a good experience for all of us.
Therefore I think that children should go on camp because we can learn, get to know people and get a good experience. So please let us go to camp.
By Brianna & Charlotte
Tuesday, March 15, 2011
Thursday, March 10, 2011
Friday, March 4, 2011
And to think I saw it on Lytton Street!
Over the last few weeks Room 18 have been working on creating our own stories, based around TO think I saw it on Mulberry Street.
Here are some of our stories! Enjoy reading...remember they are supposed to be silly, just like Dr Seuss!! Keep an eye out for the rest of our work.
We had to
- create a picture plan
- build onto each sentence
- have a noun, verb and adjective in our sentences
- try to use a linking sentence between, such as It can be better than that
And to think that I saw it on Lytton Street...
A car going to park.
A truck going to help a car.
An ice cream car stopping in the street.
A cereal box lying on the ground.
The big cereal box getting carried away. But wait, that’s no good. I can see nuts popping out of the box.
Hi Mum, all I saw today was a car going to park in a parking spot.
By Destiny
And to think that I saw it on Lytton Street...
A big fat old truck on the road.
A big fat old truck with a a trailer on the back.
But wait...what about a loud radio singing?
Well, that’s a bit boring! How about a horn on the top.
It can be better than that! Some boosters on the back of the truck.
It can be better that that though. A big fat old truck on the road.
When I got home when Mum asked me what I had seen on the way to school all I said was “I saw was a big fat truck.”
By Ethan
And to think that I saw it on Lytton Street...
A car driving down the street.
A car doing skids , no wait suddenly the car crashed and it caught on fire. A banana fireman came to put out the fire and a man came too.
No but wait...I can see an elephant walking down the road.
Hold on..what about an elephant walking down the road, towing with a carriage on the back, covered with spaghetti and the people diving into the spaghetti.
No that’s too boring, what about it started to raining chocolate and marshmellows!!
Now that is cool!
When I got home when Mum asked me what I had seen on the way to school all I said was “A car driving down the street.”
By Iuean
And to think that I saw it on Lytton Street...
A dog walking on the street. Naa.. not that. A strong dog. Wait, a deadly dog! Don’t that though. How about a dog chasing a cat. Do you like that? I want a monster dog in war. That’s boring. A crazy dog with a knife gun.
But when I got home “Hey Dad, all I saw was a dog walking on the street.”
By Zachary
And to think that I saw it on Lytton Street...
I saw a puppy on a lead on a road.
Oh no! A pink puppy pulling a truck.
Oh no , a pink puppy pulling a truck and with a booster on her back and a balloon.
But wait...what about a pink puppy pulling a truck and a balloon with a monkey on top.
But wait...that’s boring. A pink leopard pulling a truck with a monkey on top and a big ice cream.
When I got home when Mum asked me what I had seen on the way to school all I said was
“ I only saw a puppy.”
By Meagan
And to think that I saw it on Lytton Street...
A puppy running down the road. It can better than that.
I saw a ginger puppy with a blue truck behind it. But wait...what about a rainbow monkey behind the truck and playing upside down? Oh that’s a bit boring.
What about a bat adding a blue hat on the top of the truck? I can add more than that. What about a twirl on top of the hat going around and around? It can be way better than that. What about a ear beside the twirl. That’s odd. Let’s have an ear going up and down on the the twirl. Next I could have a monkey swinging off a piece of wood.
But when I get home all I say to Dad “All I saw today was a puppy running down the street.”
By Jaimee
And to think that I saw it on Lytton Street...
A wagon with a horse dragging its legs along the road. Oh wait on a second there is a zooming bee that wants to sting me...nah..that’s odd.
Hold on, what about a cat chasing behind the wagon and trying to catch up. How about a cat with a hat or a cat with a hat with a lamp on top? Now that the better sentence you ever bet!
So when I get home all I say to Dad is “All I saw was a wagon with a house.”
By Saturn Rose
Here are some of our stories! Enjoy reading...remember they are supposed to be silly, just like Dr Seuss!! Keep an eye out for the rest of our work.
We had to
- create a picture plan
- build onto each sentence
- have a noun, verb and adjective in our sentences
- try to use a linking sentence between, such as It can be better than that
And to think that I saw it on Lytton Street...
A car going to park.
A truck going to help a car.
An ice cream car stopping in the street.
A cereal box lying on the ground.
The big cereal box getting carried away. But wait, that’s no good. I can see nuts popping out of the box.
Hi Mum, all I saw today was a car going to park in a parking spot.
By Destiny
And to think that I saw it on Lytton Street...
A big fat old truck on the road.
A big fat old truck with a a trailer on the back.
But wait...what about a loud radio singing?
Well, that’s a bit boring! How about a horn on the top.
It can be better than that! Some boosters on the back of the truck.
It can be better that that though. A big fat old truck on the road.
When I got home when Mum asked me what I had seen on the way to school all I said was “I saw was a big fat truck.”
By Ethan
And to think that I saw it on Lytton Street...
A car driving down the street.
A car doing skids , no wait suddenly the car crashed and it caught on fire. A banana fireman came to put out the fire and a man came too.
No but wait...I can see an elephant walking down the road.
Hold on..what about an elephant walking down the road, towing with a carriage on the back, covered with spaghetti and the people diving into the spaghetti.
No that’s too boring, what about it started to raining chocolate and marshmellows!!
Now that is cool!
When I got home when Mum asked me what I had seen on the way to school all I said was “A car driving down the street.”
By Iuean
And to think that I saw it on Lytton Street...
A dog walking on the street. Naa.. not that. A strong dog. Wait, a deadly dog! Don’t that though. How about a dog chasing a cat. Do you like that? I want a monster dog in war. That’s boring. A crazy dog with a knife gun.
But when I got home “Hey Dad, all I saw was a dog walking on the street.”
By Zachary
And to think that I saw it on Lytton Street...
I saw a puppy on a lead on a road.
Oh no! A pink puppy pulling a truck.
Oh no , a pink puppy pulling a truck and with a booster on her back and a balloon.
But wait...what about a pink puppy pulling a truck and a balloon with a monkey on top.
But wait...that’s boring. A pink leopard pulling a truck with a monkey on top and a big ice cream.
When I got home when Mum asked me what I had seen on the way to school all I said was
“ I only saw a puppy.”
By Meagan
And to think that I saw it on Lytton Street...
A puppy running down the road. It can better than that.
I saw a ginger puppy with a blue truck behind it. But wait...what about a rainbow monkey behind the truck and playing upside down? Oh that’s a bit boring.
What about a bat adding a blue hat on the top of the truck? I can add more than that. What about a twirl on top of the hat going around and around? It can be way better than that. What about a ear beside the twirl. That’s odd. Let’s have an ear going up and down on the the twirl. Next I could have a monkey swinging off a piece of wood.
But when I get home all I say to Dad “All I saw today was a puppy running down the street.”
By Jaimee
And to think that I saw it on Lytton Street...
A wagon with a horse dragging its legs along the road. Oh wait on a second there is a zooming bee that wants to sting me...nah..that’s odd.
Hold on, what about a cat chasing behind the wagon and trying to catch up. How about a cat with a hat or a cat with a hat with a lamp on top? Now that the better sentence you ever bet!
So when I get home all I say to Dad is “All I saw was a wagon with a house.”
By Saturn Rose
Tuesday, February 22, 2011
SWIMMING GOALS
OLIVIA: Working on my distance, being able to go further
I can do this now, next time I need to keep my body straight
FRANCIS: To go faster down the length
I can do this, next time I need to concentrate on my breathing
CHRISTOPHER: To learn how to do backstroke
I need to still on this next term
BRANDON: To use my arms and legs
I need to still need to work on this
LIAM: To get better at my kicking
JOEL: To get better at breathing when I'm doing freestyle
I can do this now, I still to work on it.
SETH: To take a breath when swimming
I still need to work on this next term
JAIMEE: To breath correctly
I can do this, I need to work on keeping my legs off the bottom
MEIGHAN: To breath correctly, with my ear in the water
I can do this, but I need to do this consistently
MISTY: To use correct technique for my breathing and backstroke
I still need to work on it
ETHAN: To go faster in my backstroke
I can do this , next term I want to keep my body straight
IUEAN: to use my arms on my front
I can do this, next time I want to get better at using my arms, and getting into the big pool
CARLOS: to get my feet off the bottom
I can get them a little way off the bottom, but I still need to work on it.
EMILEE: To breath correctly, to hold my breath underwater
I can do this sometimes, but need to do it all the time
CHARLOTTE: To improve my breathing
I can do this, but now I need to go faster
MEG: To get down the whole length
I can do this! Next term I need to work on speed
EMMA: To work on my breathing
I need to continue to work on my breathing
CONNOR: To go faster in my backstroke, by kicking faster
I can do this, for next term I need to keep my body straight
ZACHARY: My breathing in freestyle, improve my backstroke
I can do this, but next term I need to continue to work at this
BRIANNA: To dive in and then swim off
I can do this, next term I need to work on my head position
SATURN ROSE: To improve my kicking in my backstroke
I can do this, and now I need to keep my body straight
SAVANNAH: Diving
I need to keep working at this
JUSTIN: Holding my breath for longer underwater
I can do this, next time I need to work on using my arms properly
DESTINY: To keep my head down when doing freestyle
I still need to work on this next term
JOSHUA: To get feet off the bottom without a flutterboard
I need to do this
RHYLEE: For next term I would like to get across the pool, without a flutterboard
JOSHUA: For next term I would like to work on my breathing
SAM: I would like to get better at my backstroke.
I can do this now, next time I need to keep my body straight
FRANCIS: To go faster down the length
I can do this, next time I need to concentrate on my breathing
CHRISTOPHER: To learn how to do backstroke
I need to still on this next term
BRANDON: To use my arms and legs
I need to still need to work on this
LIAM: To get better at my kicking
JOEL: To get better at breathing when I'm doing freestyle
I can do this now, I still to work on it.
SETH: To take a breath when swimming
I still need to work on this next term
JAIMEE: To breath correctly
I can do this, I need to work on keeping my legs off the bottom
MEIGHAN: To breath correctly, with my ear in the water
I can do this, but I need to do this consistently
MISTY: To use correct technique for my breathing and backstroke
I still need to work on it
ETHAN: To go faster in my backstroke
I can do this , next term I want to keep my body straight
IUEAN: to use my arms on my front
I can do this, next time I want to get better at using my arms, and getting into the big pool
CARLOS: to get my feet off the bottom
I can get them a little way off the bottom, but I still need to work on it.
EMILEE: To breath correctly, to hold my breath underwater
I can do this sometimes, but need to do it all the time
CHARLOTTE: To improve my breathing
I can do this, but now I need to go faster
MEG: To get down the whole length
I can do this! Next term I need to work on speed
EMMA: To work on my breathing
I need to continue to work on my breathing
CONNOR: To go faster in my backstroke, by kicking faster
I can do this, for next term I need to keep my body straight
ZACHARY: My breathing in freestyle, improve my backstroke
I can do this, but next term I need to continue to work at this
BRIANNA: To dive in and then swim off
I can do this, next term I need to work on my head position
SATURN ROSE: To improve my kicking in my backstroke
I can do this, and now I need to keep my body straight
SAVANNAH: Diving
I need to keep working at this
JUSTIN: Holding my breath for longer underwater
I can do this, next time I need to work on using my arms properly
DESTINY: To keep my head down when doing freestyle
I still need to work on this next term
JOSHUA: To get feet off the bottom without a flutterboard
I need to do this
RHYLEE: For next term I would like to get across the pool, without a flutterboard
JOSHUA: For next term I would like to work on my breathing
SAM: I would like to get better at my backstroke.
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